This is Just to Say

For literacy, we learned about an old poem called This is Just to Say by William Carlos Williams. We learned about the structure of the poem and what it was really about. We replaced some of the words. Try to figure out what words I changed?

This is the original poem

This is Just to Say
By William Carlos Williams

I have eaten
The plums in
The icebox

And which
You were
Probably
Saving
For breakfast

Forgive me
They were
Delicious
So sweet
And so cold

And this is my version

This is Just to Say, Damien

By Damien

I have eaten

The mints

That was in

The mints box

And which 

You where

Probably

Saving

For an occasion

Forgive me

They were 

so fruity

and so yummy

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