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Thursday, May 23, 2019

Personification


Walking across the footpath, my feet disappearing every step I take, the clouds crying, getting more and more hostile by the second. The sky turning grey and crying more and more.

The clouds striding angrily towards me. Everyone avoiding him, all inside, with a hot chocolate and watching a movie with the family.

I make a brand new friend. He had raisins as eyes, a carrot a nose and raisins also as a mouth. In fact, he is was my only friend until he melted to water, cooked carrot and raisins.




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