The Leaning Tower Of Pisa
Imagine looking up and a tower is leaning towards you, Staring at an ancient building looking like it will fall over onto you. That’s what it is like to be at the leaning tower of Pisa in Italy. The smell of mossy stone and sweaty people Fills my nose. I am Feeling so scared and excited at the same time. People are pushing furiously in line and off in the distance i can hear people busking for money. Now i am Climbing up the stairs and it feels as if i am climbing up a gigantic picture frame but on a slope. Squeak! busses start to park up on the curb and a stampede of tourists rush out of the doors. Kids are chattering too much so it looks like their mouths are about to fall out, while their parents are yelling at them to stay close. “Click” the cameras flash like lightning.
Hi Damien, this is so good because you have added lots of detail and info into you story. Next time you could change your I to a capital, otherwise good work!
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